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Secondary poetry

Secondary poetry

schoolwork showcase 2022 ·

A selection of poems written by children aged between 11 and 18 submitted to the SUR in English Education and Learning supplement

Sunday, 6 March 2022, 13:42

Best secondary poem

Family



The infinitely strong, protective force,



Somewhat rusty with the passing of time,



The old tractor ploughs and paves its life course,



A loving parent with purpose, sublime.



For its naive children it leads the way,



Shielding them from pain like a metal glove,



Striving always its message to relay,



Cultivating honesty, truth and love.



Unbreakable this bond of family,



Its harvest, abundant, unbridled bliss,



Parent roots take fresh branches tenderly,



And bid goodnight with a motherly kiss.



When comes the day the offspring disperse,



They’re groomed for life’s path, already rehearsed.





Vera Lukash, age 12



English International College

Singer-songwriter Peter Edgerton said: “The powerful language, strong overriding metaphor and pounding incessant rhythm evokes strength and purpose in every line. Plus, who could resist the phrase ‘unbridled bliss’? Excellent.”

Special mention secondary poem

Graveyard in springtime



Dewy at sunrise



Sun rise, sun blessed



Golden and aglow



The home of their rest

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Catching the light



Of the soft rainfall



Weeping and cleansing



Of the gentle bird call

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And the butterflies play



So the misery forfends



For a morning of peace



Beloved mother, and friend

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Then it pours, and it shines



Wake up butterflies and bees!



Dance to the picked flowers



Or the bench once a tree

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Engaged in engravings



On moss crept-up stone



Were heaven on Earth



Is among sunken bones

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Where the beating rain



Embraces the sun



And the animals weep



To laugh play and run

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To hum like a tractor



Spilling life, overflowing



The temporary temperament



That keeps us from knowing

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There is truth in the sunrise



To grace the day dawning



Glowing gold, all behold



The blissful new of mourning.

Sophie Newton, age 17



Swans Secondary School

Singer-songwriter Peter ... Edgerton said: “Enticing title, unusual, captivating vocabulary and lovely turns of phrase. Quality poem.”

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